Aw, that was so sweet! You captured Twinkle perfectly, he's a xyn of little words, but a nice guy!
I love your attention to detail, like the brighter glowing halo when Kiba crosses the moonriver and how she uses her wings to pick things up! And I liked her interactions with the companion animals and how you describe her surroundings, like the ghostles dancing over the lake. A very fun read!
I'm not a confident writer so hearing that you like it makes me happy! I'm glad I portrayed Twinkle according to his personality.
Thank you for your comment <3
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Aw, that was so sweet! You captured Twinkle perfectly, he's a xyn of little words, but a nice guy! I love your attention to detail, like the brighter glowing halo when Kiba crosses the moonriver and how she uses her wings to pick things up! And I liked her interactions with the companion animals and how you describe her surroundings, like the ghostles dancing over the lake. A very fun read!
2023-06-26 04:09:54
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firevulpix1
I'm not a confident writer so hearing that you like it makes me happy! I'm glad I portrayed Twinkle according to his personality. Thank you for your comment <3
2023-06-26 05:37:15
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