Gosh, I've always been curious about Lumine ever since I first saw her profile~ She was one of the first ones that I ever read when I first joined LR, and that got me so hyped to create characters for this setting as well!!
Partway through reading, I realised I'd started... at the end of her quest chain, instead of the beginning! ;w;" The introduction felt so natural that the story was able to flow and stand on its own, I'd say! I really enjoyed how she started off trying to turn away and make excuses to not continue her quest, but was eventually spurred on by none other than her own stubborn self~ Lumine's song really did feel magical with how you paced and phrased it, making it feel like she sang to the shrine for a long time, until there was nothing left to "say" to it.
I'll have to get around to reading the rest of her Clef Compass questline, but this was a wonderful end (or, for me, beginning) to her journey! ;w;/
AWWWW, THANK YOU so, so much ;_;! It makes me SO incredibly happy that you enjoyed my writing. Lumine is always such fun to explore since she's an older xyn, a retired knight, with quite some history to her name. My little granny, but don't let her hear that, lol XD.
Btw, one of the parts of her questline isn't public, since I only chose "option A": A selection of songs that fit her and I sent those in via claim. But I can get the songs to you, if you're interested in listening to them!
Lndubitably
Gosh, I've always been curious about Lumine ever since I first saw her profile~ She was one of the first ones that I ever read when I first joined LR, and that got me so hyped to create characters for this setting as well!!
Partway through reading, I realised I'd started... at the end of her quest chain, instead of the beginning! ;w;" The introduction felt so natural that the story was able to flow and stand on its own, I'd say! I really enjoyed how she started off trying to turn away and make excuses to not continue her quest, but was eventually spurred on by none other than her own stubborn self~ Lumine's song really did feel magical with how you paced and phrased it, making it feel like she sang to the shrine for a long time, until there was nothing left to "say" to it.
I'll have to get around to reading the rest of her Clef Compass questline, but this was a wonderful end (or, for me, beginning) to her journey! ;w;/
2025-09-30 05:52:50
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AWWWW, THANK YOU so, so much ;_;! It makes me SO incredibly happy that you enjoyed my writing. Lumine is always such fun to explore since she's an older xyn, a retired knight, with quite some history to her name. My little granny, but don't let her hear that, lol XD.
Btw, one of the parts of her questline isn't public, since I only chose "option A": A selection of songs that fit her and I sent those in via claim. But I can get the songs to you, if you're interested in listening to them!
2025-09-30 06:47:27 (Edited 2025-09-30 06:50:37)
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